A few examples of low stakes writing on the critics for our discussion; I (TF) will mostly keep silent, because I'll be commenting directly in a reply email to the writers later today:
Despite different observations from many critics that have suggested Shakespeare's Macbeth as a "vehicle for endorsing James I" (Abdalla, 2), other critics differ. One of these critics is Laila Abdalla, who asserts that the play "... endorses neither kings nor kingship—instead,
it appraises and contests the very nature of power. During his
reign, James readily recited two opposing notions of power—one
political and one domestic—to serve his immediate goals." (Abdalla, 2). Under Abdalla's view, then, the play is intended to present the dangers of the contest between political and domestic power, and more specifically, the risks of prioritizing one over the other.
Abdalla's analysis allows us to dig deeper into the power relations in a European monarchy of Shakespeare's time. Abdalla offers us irrefutable support for her claim that Shakespeare's work is not an endorsement but rather a work to present the dichotomy of power (political and domestic power) for King James I himself this notion was present,
"A good King, thinking his highest honour to consist in
the due discharge of his calling, emploieth all his studie
and paines, to procure and maintaine, by the making and
execution of good Lawes, the well-fare and peace of his
people; and as their naturall father and kindly Master[.]" (King James I, Basilikon Doron.)
In this excerpt, King James I acknowledges the existence of a domestic sphere within monarchic power itself. He assures the King is master (political power) and father (domestic power) of his subjects. When signaling the existence of these two spheres and using the metaphor of paternity, King James I is trying to balance the two competing notions. He ought to give them both attention and the opportunity for each one to serve his specific purposes at one particular time without both conflicting. Concerning this dichotomy, Abdalla writes, "During his reign, James readily recited two opposing notions of power—one political and one domestic—to serve his immediate goals," she goes on, "These two notions were the major ones held generally by early modern English culture. Macbeth evokes these theories and examines what I shall call "domestic power" as the counterpoint to political power." (Abdella, 2). Under the notion of a father, the King is a benevolent figure, under the notion of a master, the King's authority is reinforced.
TF: This constitutes a full body paragraph on the critic, which was not required, but it's welcome here, because you can see the effectiveness of the multiple use of the I Q A structure in conveying important information (i.e. about King James and "the divine right of kings") and strong analysis. Please note that in using ( ) citation, there is no comma between the last name and the page-number, and the King James quote should be followed by (Qtd in Abdalla 1). This Qtd. means "quoted," and it's used when you are quoting a source who is quoting another source.
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In regards to Lady Macbeth’s mindset at the time, Kimbrough says: “But Lady Macbeth and her society have labeled remorse and pity as merely ‘feminine.’ She and her society confuse womanhood and humanhood” (181). Being a woman meant, for them, that they couldn’t get too far in life in comparison to men. In their understanding, men could accomplished all the great things in life due to their lack of empathy, their rage and violence, which were label as the “right” traits for being masculine.
TF: This is a very effective quotation. The points after the passage are highly relevant to the play, but they don't reflect what Kimbrough is saying about the problem with Lady Macbeth's thinking; it is implying that Shakespeare considers it a mistake to think that only women can behave as ALL human beings should.
TF: This is a very effective quotation. The points after the passage are highly relevant to the play, but they don't reflect what Kimbrough is saying about the problem with Lady Macbeth's thinking; it is implying that Shakespeare considers it a mistake to think that only women can behave as ALL human beings should.
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Upon reading Cauchi's critic of Macbeth a particular concept resonated with me in regards to his defense of why he slayed Duncan's servants immediately. "Concealed in the first two lines of this speech is a clever inversion, for while Macbeth justifies his murder of the chamberlains as an all-too-human, unpremeditated act of revenge, he is simultaneously reflecting upon his earlier 'If it were done' soliloquy in which his cool-headed reason, as discursive handmaiden to conscience, had given him pause to consider the eschatological consequences of a cold-blooded regicide"( ). As the quote suggests the first two lines of his reasons, to me, an example of doublespeak. He isn't exactly dishonest, how no one can be virtuous and level headed in such an extreme moment. At the same time, Macbeth reveals his perspective of himself and those around him displaying a lack of trust in everyone but mostly himself. In his efforts to deceive, Macbeth was also consoling and convincing himself that these actions are justified.
". . . while Macbeth justifies his murder of the chamberlains as an all-too-human, unpremeditated act of revenge, he is simultaneously reflecting upon his earlier 'If it were done' soliloquy in which his cool-headed reason, as discursive handmaiden to conscience, had given him pause to consider the eschatological consequences of a cold-blooded regicide" ( ).
Note that you need the page number from Cauchi.
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I strongly believe Macbeth’s downfall was his own greed and ambition. He failed to see in te beginning how both those factors made him cross moral lines. Once Macbeth killed Duncan, his determination to hold onto his title as king started to become combined with his paranoia. The main argument of critic Cauchi states that Macbeth’s conscience and moral sense affected him throughout the play, “At the nonrational level of Macbeth’s psyche, conscience registers as ‘a dagger of the mind’: pricks of conscience that have assumed murderous, self-mutilating proportions” (337). Macbeth’s guilt about murdering king, Duncan, and ordering the murder of his friend, Banquo, caused him to have a guilty conscience. His guilt ultimately stopped him from enjoying the power he obtained, in other words enjoy the fruits of his “labor”, in time he became obsessed with maintaining the power he’s won. The guilt caused him to commit further murders in order to cover up his initial crimes. A prime example of how one bad decision will and can in the long run lead to more. I think it's also essential to highlight the fact that he does suffer torture as a result of his actions in a way that suggests Macbeth isn't just this cold-blooded killer or evil person. In spite of the fact he committed terrible crimes, he knows, on some level, that what he has done is wrong.
TF: Once again, the writer has developed a full body paragraph, not just a single I Q A that was required. There's a strong thesis statement at the beginning, and a substantial introduction to the quote. The passage is helpful to the writer's argument, and the subsequent analysis is very well-developed.
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Lady Macbeth’s fear of her husband’s inept “manly” behavior forces her to dig deep into her psyche “conjuring her spirits” and create a defense mechanism for her to cope. According to Kimbrough: “She insists on her definition of manhood as cruel, fearless, active, consistent, and brave in behalf of which she has sought to "unsex" herself (rather, uncultivate her cultivated feminine self). . .” (182). Lady Macbeth’s mental transformation enables her to take on the role as “the man” without doing so. She is merely a vessel in which Macbeth can act upon her direction, much like a “trained puppy.” Despite her husband’s military, political and domestic status, Lady Macbeth (early on the play) has a stronger sense of “self” rather than her male counterpart. Societal expectations of this era play a profound role on how she must behave towards her husband yet privately, their mutual understanding of each other allows her to take advantage of his fragile situation and grab a hold of their destiny. On a conscious level, she vocalizes her worries to him in order to evoke his inner “beast,” subconsciously, she is behaving passive-aggressively towards him in order to get what she truly desires.
Lady Macbeth’s fear of her husband’s inept “manly” behavior forces her to dig deep into her psyche “conjuring her spirits” and create a defense mechanism for her to cope. According to Kimbrough: “She insists on her definition of manhood as cruel, fearless, active, consistent, and brave in behalf of which she has sought to "unsex" herself (rather, uncultivate her cultivated feminine self). . .” (182). Lady Macbeth’s mental transformation enables her to take on the role as “the man” without doing so. She is merely a vessel in which Macbeth can act upon her direction, much like a “trained puppy.” Despite her husband’s military, political and domestic status, Lady Macbeth (early on the play) has a stronger sense of “self” rather than her male counterpart. Societal expectations of this era play a profound role on how she must behave towards her husband yet privately, their mutual understanding of each other allows her to take advantage of his fragile situation and grab a hold of their destiny. On a conscious level, she vocalizes her worries to him in order to evoke his inner “beast,” subconsciously, she is behaving passive-aggressively towards him in order to get what she truly desires.
TF: Here is another example of a full-developed paragraph with a strong quotation and thorough analysis.
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Abdalla, Laila. “Birthing Death: A Reconsideration of the Roles of Power, Politics, and the
Domestic in Macbeth.” Journal of the Wooden O, vol. 14-15, 2014-2015, pp. 1-20.
Abdalla first lays out her sense of the play’s main political theme, which you can use if you or doing either topic 1 or topic 2 of essay 2: “Macbeth contains many conflicts, but almost all of them may be subsumed under the one between the political and domestic spheres. Shakespeare weaves multiple manifestations of this crisis, in the process profoundly critiquing the systemic validation of the former at the cost of the latter” (1). She sees a conflict between politics and family (“domestic”) life, and she thinks that Shakespeare in Macbethis showing that making politics much more important than family life is a big problem.
Abdalla mentions how other critics see the play as supporting James 1’s doctrine of the Divine Right of Kings: “Critics have long recognized the play as Shakespeare’s vehicle for endorsing James I,2 the myth of the Stuart genealogy, and the new monarch’s particular fears and interests. The play, for example, condemns regicide, substantiates the sacredness and authority of the anointed king, recognizes witchcraft, and demonizes equivocation” (1-2) But she does not agree: “However, a more exacting investigation rediscovers the play as itself a massive equivocation: it endorses neither kings nor kingship—instead, it appraises and contests the very nature of power” (2). She claims that Shakespeare doesn’t take a stand on this issue but dramatizes different perspectives on this. And at the end of her essay, Abdalla states: “This play does not so much endorse James I as send him a covert message regarding the dangers of equivocating between the two notions of power” (16).
And she points out that even King James 1 himself had two opposing views of power that relate to the conflict of the political and domestic in the play:
During his reign, James readily recited two opposing notions of power—one
political and one domestic—to serve his immediate goals. These
two notions were the major ones held generally by early modern
English culture. Macbeth evokes these theories and examines what I
shall call “domestic power” as the counterpoint to political power. (2)
Notice that Abdalla says that the play “examines” the “domestic”; she does not say that Shakespeare only supports the domestic and not the political. She thinks that both kinds of power need to be used to create a satisfactory society:
The play seems not so much to argue for a union of the two as to
warn that a divorce between them promulgates a sickened form
of sexuality. That is, without the redressing force of domestic
power, political might prompts a perverse maternity, one in which
infertility begets death. Macbeth, I contend, illustrates that the king’s
competing notions of power are a formula for calamity. (2)
So she’s saying that the two kinds of power should not fight each other or try to be the same thing but coexist peacefully. The problem with political power is that it “creates” or “gives birth to” death (destruction of society), and Abdalla relates “perverse maternity” (perverted or unproductive motherhood” and “infertility” (not continuing the generations) with the domination of political power.
Those doing topic 2 can directly quote King James about “the Divine Right of Kings” in his “Speech to the Lords and Commons of the Parliament at Whitehall delivered in 1610” (2-3). Think about the first sentence: “Kings are justly called gods, for that they exercise a manner or resemblance of divine power upon earth . . . .” (2). If Kings are “gods,” then Macbeth has killed a god, and then Macbeth as king is also killed. Note that Abdalla adds: “James’s absolutist definition of monarchical right includes the right to expedient manipulation and exploitation of his subjects” (3). Abdalla also quotes James’ “domestic” idea “In Basilikon Doron,” where “James attempts to define a more benevolent and somewhat affective notion of command” (3), and those doing topic 2 might also choose to quote that passage, which seems to contradict “the divine right of kings.” (When you read the passages from King James, the letter v is our modern u. Abdallah’s interpretation of James’ “domestic” idea is very clear: “James here accentuates the domestic space in the rather sentimental rhetoric of parental self-sacrifice, emotionality, love, guidance, peace, happiness, and reciprocity” (4).
Those doing topic 3 can cite Abdalla’s idea that Macbeth is not only a criminal but a scapegoat for a system in Scotland that exists before, during, and at the end of the play that makes political power all important and totally ignores the domestic sphere: “Macbeth clearly learns this consequence, albeit too late, and is excoriated for his crimes. The real crux of the play, however, lies in the fact that Macbeth is but a scapegoat for a well-populated system. . . (4). Abdalla is referring to the “consequence” of not taking the domestic aspect into consideration. Do you agree that Macbeth, though guilty of terrible crimes, is also a victim of the dominant ideology?
When Abdalla deals with the political/domestic opposition as a (stereotypically) male role/female role difference, you can cite her ideas for topic 1, as well as the other 3 topics:
More significantly, the play seems to attribute gender identities to these two models of power. The privileging of such “masculine” elements as ambition (and similar impulses), violence, tyranny, and public success, induces an existence in which such “feminine” elements as altruism (and like sentiments), peace, fellowship, and private prosperity are stifled. … That is, though the masculine is completely uncoupled from the feminine, it nevertheless manages to engage in a sickly reproduction. The annihilation of the feminine by the masculine gives rise to the central paradox of the play—it gives birth to death, it brings to life that which cannot live and yet continues to thrive. (4)
Abdalla further explains this paradox: “These three men [Duncan, Macbeth, and Macduff], and countless others, propagate the unnatural condition where only death can thrive” (5). And she supports it by saying: “Thus, no family survives intact in Scotland, and every configuration of familial relationship is made defunct” (5). And by the middle of Act V, “all the wives beat their husbands to the grave, no mortal woman of child-bearing age is left alive, and the play is littered with dead babies and bloody children, in image and in fact” (5).
The critic considers Lady Macbeth part of the problem of the domination of masculine ideas, speaking of how Lady Macbeth’s “pursuit of the masculine engages her in a perverse maternity, one that matures from and gives birth to political power; Lady Macbeth propagates destructive and unregenerative power” (5). Those who are focusing on topics 1 and 4 can find an interesting analysis of Lady M’s manipulation of gender roles and her gendered use of language:
Lady Macbeth primarily identifies herself in terms of female
agency. Her conduct can always be subsumed under one of the
three Renaissance designations of woman—wife, hostess and
mother. However, because she aims all her energies towards the
accession of power, she vacates each of these domestic roles of
any signifi cance. In line with the criterion of wife or helpmeet,
Lady Macbeth’s actions stem not for her own glories but those
of her spouse. She never makes mention of personal profi t, and
even in soliloquy, her profoundest deliberations and resolutions
for action are for his betterment. (8)
Abdalla does not consider Macduff a hero: “Macduff is undoubtedly not as egotistically motivated as Macbeth, but his unblinking dedication to the political demands of his country leads him to sacrifice the domestic aspects of his life in an astonishing way” (11). The critic
sees it as a big problem “that Scotland, and ostensibly the play, perceive him [Macduff]as the savior” (5) at the end of the play.
Here is where Abdalla elaborates on why Macduff is NOT a savior for Scotland but someone who gives birth to death; she blames him for not protecting his wife and children:
In his eagerness to recruit Malcolm and raise an army, Macduff
abandons his wife and children in a country run by a man who
has amply demonstrated his enthusiasm for damaging the innocent
and defenseless. . . . When Macduff places political demands in a
superior position to domestic ones, he againreveals the meaninglessness
of the Scottish system. The play raises several questions: Has not Macduff
placed the cart before the horse? Is killing Macbeth more exigent than saving
his own family? For whom does he save the country? Is Scotland, that
nebulous concept for whom he sacrifices his family, anything more than a
collection of families? (12)
Contrasting him with Banquo, whom she sees as “a devoted father” (7) who values famly, Abdalla is even critical of King Duncan:
In Scotland, power and family are mutually exclusive, and power is primary.
Duncan is more affectionate and paternal with Captain Macbeth,
the most successful enforcer in his power stratagems, than he is
with Malcolm or Donalbain.14 By dividing the political from the
domestic, Duncan renders both meaningless and, ironically, fails at
both. He is not a present father, and as king he is slaughtered by
the very man he treated more like a son than his own. . . (7).
Abdalla does not see the next king, Malcolm, as a good solution to the problem of Macbeth, because he is too passive and traditionally feminine: … [Malcolm] is curiously passive, even though it is his father who was slain and his throne purloined. In effect, of all the play’s men, he has the most obligation and justification to resort to action, and yet he relinquishes that duty to others” (16). She points out that Macduff is the one who takes action, and she considers Malcolm’s current virginity as symbolic proof that he will not reproduce and therefore do his duty to perpetuate the family. She also points out that the son of Banquo, “Fleance, the real hope for the future, . . .is a final missing baby in a play full of missing
babies. Symbolically, the future is absent and silent” (16).
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Cauchi, Francesca. “’Compunctious Visitings’: Consciene as Unequivocal Witness in
Macbeth.” Philological Quarterly, vol. 94, no. 4, 2015, pp. 335-351.
Cauchi’s article works well for topic 3. It might be quoted briefly for topic 2 when it refers to the divine right of kings on p. 41 and on p. 46, in reference to Banquo. But for topic 2, the 2 other articles might be better. Although my prompt indicates that it should be used for topic 4, I was wrong, and I apologize; the brief section on Lady Macbeth will not be helpful.
Cauchi argues that Macbeth’s conscience does damage to him in the course of the play:
“At the nonrational level of Macbeth’s psyche, conscience registers as ‘a dagger of the mind’: pricks of conscience that have assumed murderous, self-mutilating proportions” (337). Here is a significant passage in which she uses a quotation from the play where she thinks Macbeth is really confessing his sense of guilt to support this point:
It is also implicit in Macbeth’s later apostrophic supplication to “seeling Night”
to hoodwink “pitiful day” and with its “bloody and invisible hand / Cancel and tear
to pieces that great bond/ Which keeps me pale” (3.2.46–50). By handing the
murder weapon to Night, an accessory to the murder on account of having
provided the assassins with the necessary cover of darkness, Macbeth
attempts to hoodwink his conscience. In doing so he breaks the divine seal
stamped upon “that great bond”—the wordplay of seel and seal invited by
the word bond—of which alone he is fearful. Ostensibly the hereditary bond whereby Banquo’s descendants, according to the witches’ prophecy, will be kings, “that great
bond” (note the all-important modifier here) to which Macbeth refers is the
inviolable bond between man and his soul. In willfully tearing it to pieces,
Macbeth effectively hands the murder weapon to his conscience, which, like
a “bloody and invisible hand,” bears lacerating witness to the regicidal hand
that murdered not only Duncan but his own soul. (337)
Cauchi is using the words “sealing”/”seal” and “bond” to show that the bond (or trust or understanding “between [a] man and his soul” is supposed to have a stamp or “seal” (of approval) on it, just as there is a bond (which has an official seal) between a king and his descendants to continue the dynasty of a kingdom. But “night” is a different kind of “seal”: it prevents witnesses from seeing the terrible thing that Macbeth did. Cauchi interprets Macbeth as having knifed his own bond with his soul, so his conscience is murdering him.
And the critic emphasizes how “Macbeth, who, despite his memory being a mephitic fume of horror and revulsion and his nature being drenched in Duncan’s blood, seeks God’s blessing as earnestly as the men he is about to slaughter” (338) to support her thesis. Also, look at the lines she quotes from the play in the second paragraph of p. 339. And also note her interpretation of the famous speech (II, 3, line 284-289) where M. praises Duncan’s goodness; she sees this as an admission that M. himself is guilty of sin:
The above-cited lines, uttered by Macbeth in the immediate aftermath of
Duncan’s murder and taken by the assembled generals and nobles as an ad
hoc funeral oration over the death of the good and gracious King, articulate
in the form of a public, if veiled, confession Macbeth’s heavy judgment upon
the death of his own soul and his formerly “blessed” state of grace. (339-340)
Cauchi goes as far as to claim that Macbeth has Banquo killed to cancel his own guilt about murdering Duncan:
Banquo’s goodness trumpets “that great bond” between man and God, and
by extension between subject and sovereign: that bond which Macbeth ruptured
when he murdered Duncan and feels compelled to “cancel and tear to
pieces” by murdering the one man (“There is none but he”) who bears living
witness to it. As Macbeth confesses to his hired assassins, it is on account of
the “bloody distance” (3.1.115) that separates him from Banquo—the same
distance that separates the damned from the blessed, the “demi-wolves”
(3.1.93) from the demi-gods, and the rank defilement of manhood from the
rank and file of manhood (3.1.101–2)—“That every minute of his [Banquo’s]
being thrusts / Against my near’st of life” (3.1.116–17). The word “thrusts”
rehearses the play’s central conceit. . . . (346)
Of course, if you think Cauchi is right in her interpretation, it’s irrational for Macbeth to think that you can cancel the guilt from one crime by killing the living person who somehow is a “witness” to M’s guilt (though he didn’t actually see the crime committed). Cauchi’s use of the word “conceit” regarding daggers/knives/thrusting is what we have called motif (a repeated trope). A “conceit” is a trope that conveys a complex concept.
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Kimbrough, Robert. “Macbeth: the Prisoner of Gender.” Shakespeare Studies, vol. 16,
Jan. 1983, pp. 175-190.
This analysis of gender is highly suitable for topic 1, but gender hierarchies also relate to power relations in a monarchy, so it’s relevant to topic 2, and there is character analysis of both Macbeth and Lady Macbeth when one deals with gender in the play, so this essay is highly useful for all 4 topics.
Here is an important passage of feminist critique that suggests that Shakespeare himself intends to oppose patriarchal ideology with something more inclusive than the dominance of particular gender traits:
Macbeth’s death, first psychic then physical, stems from his failure to allow the tender aspects of his character to check those tough characteristics which are celebrated by the chauvinistic war ethic of his culture, championed by his wife, and defined in the extreme by the nature of the first two murderers. In his attempt to "better" himself, he is "helped" by Lady Macbeth, whose tragic career parallels and counterpoints his. Although they fail miserably on the stage of this life, Shakespeare constantly keeps before us their potential for human fulfillment. In spite of their isolating, alienating behavior in the play, a bond with the audience is maintained so that we are not merely repulsed; we are moved through pity to understand and to fear the personal and social destructiveness of polarized masculinity and femininity. (177)
Notice how Kimbrough speaks of M’s psychological death (before his actual death) and how he relates it to a lack of balance between traditionally male and female characteristics. The critic also points out that Shakespeare humanizes M and Lady M enough so that we can feel pity for them and see that they could have chosen to try for this balance—with better results. Note the word “polarized”: polar opposites. Kimbrough is saying that it doesn’t have to be this way: one can blend the positive traits of traditionally male and female attributes into effective and moral humanbehavior.
Kimbrough goes on to explain how the polarization tends to work in the Renaissance or Early Modern period:
In Macbeth, and elsewhere in Shakespeare, as in Elizabethan literature in general, to be "manly" is to be aggressive, daring, bold, resolute, and strong, especially in the face of death, whether giving or receiving. To be "womanly" is to be gentle, fearful, pitying, wavering, and soft, a condition often signified by tears. That machismo was a positive cultural virtue in Shakespeare's day is what gives point to Lady Macbeth's strikes against her husband. Indeed, the play opens and closes with ceremonial and romantic emphasis on brave manhood. (177)
Kimbrough cites the cold reaction of Old Siward to his son’s death at the hands of Macbeth in Act V as a perfect example of extreme macho ideology:
This refusal to show sorrow—rather, this complete rejection of sorrow—is so extreme that it makes most in a modern audience uncomfortable, and such a reaction may have been intended by Shakespeare, for his fullest definition of humanity involves the show of both "manly" courage and "womanly" sorrow. (178)
Kimbrough goes on to analyze the gender discourse in the Malcolm/Macduff dialogue about how Macduff receives the news of his family’s slaughter. The paragraph on this ends with the following interpretation that supports a refusal of polarization as a healthful way of thinking:
Nevertheless, the point Shakespeare makes_through Macduff is clear: bravery and compassion are not incompatible; they are both natural, human attributes. When Macduff says, "I must also feel it as a man," had he said woman, the speech would be just as powerful because Macduff's response is a fully-realized human response. (178).
Kimbrough’s analysis of Lady Macbeth’s gender imagery is especially useful to both topics 1 and 4; he is demonstrating that, in the way she uses tropes that relate to Renaissance science, philosophy, and spirituality to describe her goals, Lady M is moving toward self-destruction, toward death, in trying to “become” a “man”:
Lady Macbeth wants to become cruel, which is a so-called masculine trait. But in order to become cruel, she must close off the flow of blood from having "access and passage" to the heart, which is the seat of love, the source of "remorse," pity, compassion, and contrition—all of which are "compunctious" (Shakespeare coined the word) attributes of our human nature. Human nature, in turn, takes its shape and being from the vital spirits that are carried in the atomies of the bloodstream, a major function of which, according to Aristotle and the Elizabethans, was to keep the heart alive. When the blood stops flowing into the heart, the heart loses its source of vitality and hardens—which leads to despair and suicide, the ultimate murder, the sin against life itself (hence the unpardonable sin). Shakespeare is saying that compunction (the ayenbyte of inwyt) is natural and therefore human. But Lady Macbeth and her society have labeled remorse and pity as merely "feminine." She and her society confuse womanhood and humanhood. In rejecting that which she has been made to think is weak and womanly within her in order to become cruel and manly, she moves away from her humanity toward the demonic, toward becoming a life-denying witch instead of toward that sixteenth-century secular ideal, Dame Nature, the androgynous force that cre-ated the world and keeps it in motion toward fulfillment. (181)
On the next page, Kimbrough discusses how Macbeth goes from the rational, balanced perspective of not planning to kill Duncan-- "We will proceed no further. . . . I dare do all that may become a man"—to be influenced by Lady M’s gender-based tropes: “She insists on her definition of manhood as cruel, fearless, active, consistent, and brave in behalf of which she has sought to "unsex" herself (rather, uncultivate her cultivated feminine self). . .” (182).
Kimbrough has a strong analysis of Macbeth’s assertion that his wife should only give birth to boys:
Macbeth has succumbed to the gender definitions of male and female of his society as they have been expressed by Lady Macbeth—divided, separated definitions which reject the bonding nurture of the milk of human kindness—as can be seen in his reductive, simplistic syllogism: all men are tough; you are tough; therefore, all children coming from you will be, should be, had better be men. Even though his response is strained and sarcastic, it shows his conversion to her point of view. The two are in league against humanity (183).
Kimbrough argues that Lady Macbeth is not only an evildoer but a victim of her own culture:
Lady Macbeth's culture, however, did not allow her to truly develop her full self. She operates from the restrictive base assumptions of a culturally defined feminine self. Furthermore, when she says "unsex me," she really means ungender me, which serves to point up the cultural confusion and misunderstanding of sex and gender in the seventeenth century, let alone the twentieth. And the irony of this attempt to masculate herself is highlighted by the fact that she was trying to be the "good and dutiful" wife of the newly emerging middle-class culture, trying to "better" her husband. . . . Through a literal self-effacement, she attempts to back and support her spouse in his worldly ambition and to force him to compete in the male hierarchy. But in trying to act a socially appropriate role, she acts unnaturally; she moves counter to the pulls of kindness. She cannot deny her humanity; insanity is the only path out of the position she has fashioned. Yet, even in her resolution and in her madness, there is moving recognition of the bond of nature: "Had he not resembled / My father as he slept, I had donest" (11.6.12-13); "Yet who would have thought the old man to have had so much blood in him?" (V.1.35). (187)
Therefore, Kimbrough is saying that evidence of her “humanity” disrupts Lady M’s efforts to “become” male, and the contradictions eventually drive her crazy. Also, the critic illustrates that Macbeth, “No matter how steeped in blood, . . . never loses sight of a different life, a truly better life,” though he can’t go back to it.
The speech [that the critic quotes in V, 3, lines 22-28] allows us to pity Macbeth because it shows he retains a vision of a fuller, healthier, “wholier” life, even though he has narrowed his life, repressed his nature, choked his human kindness. And a final humanizing touch throughout the play is that Lord and Lady Macbeth love each other. (187)
You will want to consider whether you agree that M and Lady M love each other on the basis of textual evidence.
I have not finished reading Abdalla's on Macbeth but contrary to her opinion, I feel Shakespeare is very much praising and reinforcing James I's divine right. It very much reminds me of Machiavelli's The Prince; it was clear that Machiavelli was trying to win over Lorenzo Medici by exposing to him the various ways he might consider or not to reign, the different mistakes he might make, and so on... I am not sure which work was published first but I would dare to say Shakespeare or Machiavelli influenced the other.
ReplyDeleteSam, the Prince was published in 1532; Shakespeare was born in 1564 and wrote the play in the first decade of the next (17th) century. It's good that you have a perspective on Abdalla's thesis; it will energize the paper to disagree with her, firmly and specifically and respectfully!
DeleteWhen I say that Shakespeare or Machiavelli influenced the other I am referring to the strategy of writing a play or treatise to win over a superior.
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Will you be providing us with an outline this time?
Yes, I understood your point.
DeleteEveryone will do a low stakes outline (next week), then I will take those low stakes and propose 1 or 2 outlines for each of the 4 topics, and by general consensus, these outlines will be ratified or modified and then ratified. See the course schedule for next week.
Professor Fink, our next essay will be on Macbeth correct?
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Yes, it's due on May 20. Please look at the prompt in the email I sent yesterday or in the "Essay 2: Organization" post.
DeleteI liked what Kimbrough said about Lady M when he said: "She and her society confuse womanhood and humanhood." It is evident that they think being cruel means that they have to forget their humanity.
ReplyDeleteGabriela, this is a very important aspect of Kimbrough's thesis.
DeleteI am really confused on Abdalla's position. Or the lockdown just messed my brain up. I do not see her point. She says the play is not intended to show support for James I, but that it is intended to present different perspectives on the matter (Divine right). I am extremely confused on how to make use of Abdalla's analysis in my paper when she clearly is injecting more than political matter, psychological and philosophical mater, and even worst, for me to respectfully make a case against her case. I could argue that Abdalla makes use of sophistries. I don't see how her analysis can be useful for someone choosing topic 2 for the essay.
ReplyDeleteWhen I say "respectfully," I mean don't call her an idiot if you disagree. If you really think it's sophistry, then say so, but quietly, not loudly. I assume you've read my analysis of Abdalla, so the fault may be with me. Perhaps back-channel me by email to point out things I say in my analysis that are hard to follow or are making Abdalla look like a sophist, and then I can clarify my interpretations of her ideas for you.
DeleteI think that in the Early Modern or Renaissance period, political matter was often deeply influenced by both psychological (i.e. spiritual) and philosophical matter, and my understanding is informed by having read cultural historians such as E.M.W. Tillyard and New Historicist literary critics some years ago. In that sense, Abdalla is not wrong to show the interpenetration of these forces. I assume you are a historical materialist in your methodology, but let's remember that a critic may relate the history of ideas to a given literary text. Hope this helps.
I will try to read it again for the 4th time and work with whatever I can skim through that does not complicate things too much, I like diligence but for the sake of my other assignatures and me not going crazy I will not get too much into it.
DeleteAnyone else chose topic 2?
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ReplyDeleteAs we begin today's class, I would like to point out first that, beginning next Monday, you have 3 low stakes assignments in a row. Low stakes writing tasks are not optional; doing them very close to the deadline (at most, a day late) is mandatory, and altogether, they count 25% of your grade. Most of these assignments will take you between 5 and 15 minutes; they are not so demanding, but they are very valuable in guiding you toward completion of the long, high-stakes writings.
In light of the pandemic crisis, I am making 1 out of the 3 low stakes assignments for essay 2 optional--the last one, which is a body paragraph that will be in the actual (high stakes) paper. Therefore, instead of 7, you are required to do 6 low stakes assignments this semester. You can check the syllabus for how the 25% for the low stakes writings is calculated.
The first of these low stakes assignments, a partial paragraph with the introduction of a quote from one of the critics, the quotation itself, and a sentence relating the quote to some aspect of your argument in the paper, has already been done very well by one of your classmates. Please ask me any questions you have about how to do this brief writing task.
Also, if you don't have questions about my written lectures in this post on the articles by Abdalla and Kimbrough, please tell us what parts of Abdalla and/or Kimbrough's argument you might use--either to disagree with them or to show how they support your ideas-- in essay 2.
I should add that when we were working on essay 1, several of you told me how useful it was to do the body paragraph before actually submitting the essay.
DeleteGood morning,
ReplyDeleteI'm very interested in the Kimbrough and abdalla articles and thinking about using them for topic 1
Yes, Elvin, even though Abdalla is doing a political analysis, she is presenting a binary opposition of the domestic vs. the political that can translate into:
ReplyDeletetraditional women's sphere (the domestic) vs. traditional men's sphere/patriarchal culture (the political).
Good morning professor,
ReplyDeleteI believe for my essay Abdalla and Cauchi are best option for topic 3 though all can be somehow used for the essay.
Giselle, Abdalla will be useful because she deals with where Macbeth goes wrong but also where he actually had more decent ideas, and Cauchi is the most obvious choice because she directly and fully analyzes Macbeth's psychological makeup. So perhaps you would quote Cauchi 3-5 times and Abdalla only 2 or 3.
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ReplyDeleteI like Kimbrough's views for topic 4. I think I'll use him for essay 2.
I have a question: Do we have to use 2 articles in addition with the novel??
Gabriela, remember that Macbeth is a play, not a novel. Yes, you use only 2 articles, not 3. You quote from the 2 articles between 2 and 5 times each, and you quote from Macbeth at least 7 times, but probably more, in the 10 or so body paragraphs.
DeleteI agree with you that Kimbrough is good for topic 4, even though he doesn't have many paragraphs on Lady Macbeth; what he does include is useful. Abdalla also mentions Lady M quite a bit in terms of what we have called her attempt to "become" "male."
Ok, thank you.
DeleteThis is from Edona:
ReplyDeleteFor the blog, I agree with Abdalla’s critic when it comes to Lady Macbeth. She show’s herself as a women and makes it very clear where she stands as a women in the monarchy. She talks about femininity, but has the desire to have a King’s power, which is something a women will never get unless she is the next in line for the thrown. This is where I kinda see the divine right come in play because it shows the Kings right to rule from God. It would be considered a sin if you go against god and who he chose to do what. Especially during Shakespeare’s time, God was the highest power.
This is also from Edona:
ReplyDeleteYou can also see how when Lady M, was hallucinating about the death of the king (where she wants Macbeth to murder him) as a sign from God as a small punishment for trying to do the most sinful thing you can do during that time. One of the scenes uses “damn”, which is very close to the word “hell” and it can be seen as a foreshadow of what there is to come for her ( death).
good morning
ReplyDeleteI believe Kimbroughs article is best suited for topic 4. Also can we use any articles we found on our topic for the essay?
Munir, please don't use any articles I didn't give you. The idea is just to focus on 2 critics.
DeleteIn other words, the critics I gave you will be enough, and you should focus about 80% on your own ideas and 20% on the 2 critics. For the low stakes assignment due on Monday, pick the critic whom you find most useful.
DeleteAbdalla will be good for topic 1 in the essay.
ReplyDeleteYes, Ethiel, Abdalla focuses on how the main male AND female characters are caught in the political (male-dominant) realm overwhelming the domestic (female-identified) realm.
Deletei feel that Kimbrough's views would be a good fit for topic 4.
ReplyDeleteYes, Annie, Kimbrough does talk about Lady Macbeth, but not for many paragraphs. That's ok, if you quote Kimbrough twice, it will be enough if the quotes are useful.
DeleteGood Morning Professor,
ReplyDeleteNo questions so far. Thank You.
Hello Professor,
ReplyDeleteNo questions so far for essay 2. I will email you if anything.
hello professor i dont have any quetions so far im just trying to decide which other critic article would best fit for topic 3 i am definetly using critic Cauchi
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Yes, Kaniya, Cauchi is excellent, but I think the other 2 both have a lot about Macbeth's psychological makeup. Perhaps the way to decide is to see which passages from the 2 texts most cause you to agree or disagree fully with their perspective.
Deleteyes i definitely agree with you thanks
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Morning Professor,
ReplyDeleteI'm just a little lost about what "conscience" means in Cauchi's article.
Other than that, her analysis is pretty understandable.
- Thank you!
Gabriela, "conscience" means Macbeth's sense of morality, of good vs. evil, and the sense of guilt that comes from doing evil.
ReplyDeleteGood morning Professor,
ReplyDeleteWhen quoting do we have to include the note as well or anything she quotes?
What does Cauchi mean when they mention "the perfect spy o'th'time"(3.1.129) about the Third Murder, do they mean the Third Murder is a representation of Macbeth?
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Giselle, I'm not sure what you mean by "the note": do you mean if the critic uses a footnote or ( ) citation, must you include that, too? There's no point in including a footnote, but the ( ) citation is optional. If you leave out the citation, then put . . . to show omission.
ReplyDeleteCauchi means exactly what you say. Of course, Macbeth authorizes the third murderer's actions, but Cauchi is going farther in indicating that Macbeth was really doing the deed. I have my doubts about her interpretation, but see what you think.
Cauchi's writing displays many good vs. evil commodities especially regarding consciousness. Some characters such as Macbeth and Macduff were loyal subjects to their superiors, then ended up becoming corrupted due to manipulative wives(Lady Macbeth), the thirst for vengeance (Macduff) and power.
ReplyDeleteTiffani, you make an important point about Macbeth and Lady Macbeth, but Macduff is only disloyal to King Macbeth because he felt that Macbeth was murderously disloyal to King Duncan. Abdalla would argue that Macduff's evil is how he abandons his wife and children, not his resistance to Macbeth when the latter is king.
DeleteKimbrough's article is very clear and very understanding.
ReplyDeleteSincerely,
Jenny Lin.
For me Cauchi's article would favor topic 3 & 4. I feel topic 3 would be easier for me to write and expand on. I can psychologically analyze his suggestible nature to completely abandon morals and logic at the first sign of a prophecy.
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